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It is Unwise for College Students to Hire Cleaners Recently,whether should the college students hire a cleaner or not have aroused a hotted discussion among societies.Some people in favor of it as it will save time for themself to do more important thing.However, others think it is not appropriate for students pay money to the cleaner.As far as l am concerned,l give more weight on the later opinoin . As a famous saying goes: How do you clean the world wothout cleaning your house?.First of all,since we admitted into the university, most of us are spent on money from our parents, which is a good reason for us say no to hire cleaners.What's more,college life is a period of cooperation and communication with others, especially get along well with our roomates,working and cleaning together is an excellent way to cultivate the good relationship. Last but not least,as a college student,laziness is the last character should we keep for we have our responsibility to protect our house ,even our country . In conclusion,it is not wise to hire the cleaner for a college student . Let's deal with our little thing by ourselves and be a better man .
