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高级词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
It is Unwise for College Students to Hire Cleaners Recently,whether the college students should hire a cleaner or not have aroused a heated debate among societies.Some people in favor of it as it will save time for themselves to do more important thing.However, others think it is not appropriate for students pay money to the cleaner.As far as l am concerned,l give more weight on the later opinion. As a famous saying goes: How do you sweep the world without cleaning your house?.First of all,since we admitted into the university, most of us are spent on money from our parents, which is a good reason for us say no to hire cleaners.What's more,college life is a period of cooperation and communication with others, especially get along well with our roommates,working and cleaning together is an excellent way to cultivate the good relationship. Last but not least,as a college student,laziness is the last character should we keep for we have our responsibility to protect our house,even our country. In conclusion,it is not wise to hire the cleaner for a college student. Let's deal with our little thing by ourselves and be a better man.
