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My Mother It is the function of mother's love,to provide the continuty for our national life,to transmit to children the best of they own that has been tested in the time and tide.Luckily,most of us enjoy on this love,which to raise the body of children and improve abilities that help us in accord with the requirements of the future. My mother is a farmer,borned and grown in the difficult times,but she is such a wiseable mother that no one else can replace her in my heart.When l was a little child,she taught me to count numbers and recited passages.It was she told me that study is the only way to go out of the mountain and enter the outside world,which made me pay more attention to my study.With her support in enough money and warm words,l am going to finish my university studying in the next year,which will make a big difference on me. It is the love of mother,to put aside pride and prejudice,and with courage and single-minded devotion,to find the truth and teach the truth that shall keep children develop smoothly.
