2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

As people always say,Nothing is impossible as soon as we put our hardworking into it.In fact,life is the tough stone which are frequently crashed by the fluing water,would be defeated in the end. Then what is the most important factory to our success?Strong will can be the suitable choice.One the one hand,it is our determine that encourage us to walk ahead for the great task when it comes to a vital corner or difficult crossings.On the other hand,only than will we hold on the chances to truely achieve our goals that we are looking forward to. Last but not at least,study always attach its importance to our bright future.Then why not keep the work continuing to be a useful one thanking for our society?