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2007年专八英语作文真题:经济差距影响友谊

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:14浏览次数:4223
要求:
题目 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.
说明 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. What do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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文章衔接手法恰当;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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My Mother It is the function of mother's love,to provide the continuity for our national life,to transmit to children the best of they own that have been tested in the time and tide.Luckily,most of us enjoy on this love,which to raise the body of children and improve abilities that help us in accord with the requirements of the future. My mother is a farmer,borned and grown in the difficult times,but she is such an intelligent mother that no one else can replace her in my heart.When l was a little child,she taught me to count numbers and recited passages.It was she told me that study is the only way to go out of the mountain and enter the outside world,which made me pay more attention to my study.With her support in enough money and warm words,l am going to finish my university studying in the next year,which will make a big difference on me. It is the love of mother,to put aside pride and prejudice,and with courage and single-minded devotion,to find the truth and teach the truth that shall help children develop smoothly.

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