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Saving Money for Better Tomorrow There is a hot debate that whether people should save money for tomorrow or use tomorrow’s money today. The consumption concept is different from country to country. In my eyes, we should save money for a better tomorrow, especially in China. Saving money, which means using money carefully and rationally, is by no means of good benefit for us. First, by saving money, we can get a happier future. A majority of young people in China has heavy burden because they need to rent an apartment or buy a house for their family, raise their kids, and look after their parents and grandparents, which undoubtedly cost them a considerate amount of expenditure, and this is one part of the reason why we should save money for tomorrow. Second, saving money avoids dilemmas when something financially emergent happens. Compared China to other high welfare states, most of the Chinese are fail to enjoy subsidies and bonus provided by the government, which mainly accounts for the conservative consumption view of Chinese. Therefore, people keep their bank balance in case of some urgent uses. Last but not least, saving money is not only a way of practicing money management, but also a fundamental step to invest and make profits. Only those who budgets reasonably will double their property. In addition, what should be reminded of is that saving money is not equal to parsimony, an extreme way that would cause badly insufficient consumption and even low economy growth. In a word, saving money is a wisdom that brings us to a better tomorrow.