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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33569
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Saving Money for Better Tomorrow There is a hot debate that whether people should save money for tomorrow or use tomorrow’s money today. The consumption concept is different from country to country. In my eyes, we should save money for a better tomorrow, especially in China. Saving money, which means using money carefully and rationally, is by no means of good benefit for us. First, by saving money, we can get a happier future. A majority of young people in China has heavy burden because they need to rent an apartment or buy a house for their family, raise their kids, and look after their parents and grandparents, which undoubtedly cost them a considerate amount of expenditure, and this is one part of the reason why we should save money for tomorrow. Second, saving money avoids dilemmas when something financially emergent happens. Compared China to other high welfare states, most of the Chinese are fail to enjoy subsidies and bonus provided by the government, which mainly accounts for the conservative consumption view of Chinese. Therefore, people keep their bank balance in case of some urgent uses. Last but not least, saving money is not only a way of practicing money management, but also a fundamental step to invest and make profits. Only those who budgets reasonably will double their property. In addition, what should be reminded of is that saving money is not equal to parsimony, an extreme way that would cause badly insufficient consumption and even low economy growth. In a word, saving money is a wisdom that brings us to a better tomorrow.

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