2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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One of the most severe challenges confronted with by China is aging population.Experts claim that in the next forty years, Chinese elderly population will be close to 50 billions, one thirds of the total population. There is on doubt that it will bring chinese economic growth enormous pressure, but it also mean more commercial opportunities. Aging population will provide the development of nursing home industry with good prospects.According to rough statistic,50 billionss old peoples can offer the nuring home industry 50000 billions economic benifits at least per month.