2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend will come to my hometown,I will show him the most beautifu place to him. my hometown is a small country where have lots of mine mountian.it's famous for mine.i will take him to see the mine mountain,It is a good place to know about my hometown's culture.in my hometown,there have a big lake.The lake is name green dragon lake,The lake is very clean and pour,in fact it set in a park.I still remember in my chilhood,I usually went to the park,all day i stayed at there,i felt happaness .so i will take my friend to here, make him enjoy it.i obsolute sure that he will fall in love with it.also special snacks is necessary.im my hometown,have a good place where full of food.In here ,you can find varies of snacks.that fantastic!now im excited to meet my friend. I will make him feel comfortable just like at home.