2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

If my foreign friend will come to my hometown,I will show him the most beautiful place to him. my hometown is a small city where have lots of mine .it's famous for mineral.i will take him to visit the mine,It is a good place to know about my hometown's culture.in my hometown,there is a big lake.The lake is name green dragon lake,The lake is very clean and pure.In fact it is located in the park.I still remember in my childhood,I usually went to the park,all day. I stayed there,I felt happaness .So i will take my friend to here, make him enjoy it.i think that he will fall in love with it.also special snacks is necessary.im my hometown,There is a good place that full of food.In here ,you can find varies of snacks.that fantastic!now im excited to meet my friend. I will make him feel comfortable just like at home.