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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71648
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。

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If my foreign friend will come to my hometown,I will show him the most beautiful place to him. my hometown is a small city has lots of mine.it's famous for mineral.i will take him to visit the mine,it is a good place to know about my hometown's culture.in my hometown,there is a big lake.the lake is name green dragon lake,The lake is very clean and pure.In fact it is located in the park.I still remember in my childhood,I usually went to the park,all day. I stayed there,I felt happaness .So i will take my friend go here, make him enjoy it.i think that he will fall in love with it.also special snacks is necessary.im my hometown,There is a good place full of food.Here ,you can find all kinds of snacks.that fantastic!Now im very excited that can introduce to my feriends in my hometown specialty I will make him feel comfortable just like at home.

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