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We all know that "every coin has two sides", therefore, a booming and profitable business as tourism is, it is undoubtly has some handcaps, which, in some extend, might sthrengthen our living environment.but comparied with industries producing thousand tons of gas or gut, the influnce tourism bronght seems slight even zero.so I think that we should make a leap of tourism. Here are my personal views .first, it's increasing essential for a nation to develop economy strength,which is regarded as constructionbase of a nation and a corn of competition between integrated national strength.so we are supposed to promote tourism with its huge profits.second, only if we have adquade nconomy power, we can shouder the responsiblity of dealing with pollution and then pursuing better life.last but not least, tourism's development contribute to pushing ahead of national culture ,which is a characteristic symbol weighted national culture soft strength. In a conclusion, we need to boost tourism.
