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Nowadays,a large amount of information fills off our daily life,including varies of irrelevant information.As the old saying goes that"a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention",distinguishing useful information and discard faithful information is of vital importance for us. So what should people do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information?Firstly,enriching knowledge is a genius method.When people have mastered enough knowledge,they will improve ability to tell right from wrong.What's more,friends and relatives around people may be able to put forward valuable opinion.People can ask them for help,and then would be much clear.Last but not least,the government should stand out illegal to decrease the irrelevant information of the internet,for nowadays internet has been a vital road to get information. There are all kinds of methods to distinguish useful information,let us clear our eyes and become a genius person.
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