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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5750[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章衔接手法恰当;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a large amount of information fills off our daily life,including varies of irrelevant information.As the old saying goes that"a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention",distinguishing useful information and discard faithful information is of vital importance for us. So what should people do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information?Firstly,enriching knowledge is a genius method.When people have mastered enough knowledge,they will improve ability to tell right from wrong.What's more,friends and relatives around people may be able to put forward valuable opinion.People can ask them for help,and then would be much clear.Last but not least,the government should stand out illegal to decrease the irrelevant information of the internet,for nowadays internet has been a vital road to get information. There are all kinds of methods to distinguish useful information,let us clear our eyes and become a genius person.

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