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We all know that "every coin have two sides", therefore, a booming and profitable business as tourism is, it is undoubtly has some handcaps, which, in some tend, might therathen our living environment.but comparied with industries producing thousand tons of gas or gut, the influnce tourism bronght seems slight even zero.ConsequentlyI think that we should make a leap of tourism. Here are my personal views.first, it's increasing essential for a nation to develop economy strength,which is regarded as foundation of a nation and a corn of competition between integrative national strength.so we are supposed to promote tourism with its huge profits.second, only if we have adquade nconomic power, we can shouder the responsibility of dealing with pollution and then pursuing better life.last but not least, tourism's development contribute to pushing ahead of national culture ,which is a characteristic symbol weighted national cultural soft power. In conclusion, we need to boost tourism.
