2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(74)写作:最好的朋友Lucy

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

My best friend is Lucy. she is generous and like to share anything with others.She is helpful and she likes help people in need. She is very humorous and she is good at making people laugh.She always help classmates solve problems ,and all students want to make friends with her. she want to be a volunteer when she grows up ,and help more people in need . This is my best friend. I like her.