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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇使用熟练，但拼写错误要注意。
We all know that "every coin have two sides", therefore, a booming and profitable business as tourism is, it undoubtful has some handcaps, which, in some tend, might threaten our living environment.But compared with industries producing thousand tons of gas or gut, the influence that tourism brought seems slight even zero. . Consequently I think that government should make a leap of tourism. Here are my personal views.first, it's increasing essential for a nation to develop economy strength,which is regarded as foundation of a nation and a key of competition between integrative national strength.so we are supposed to promote tourism with its huge profits.second, only if we have adequate nconomic power, we can shouder the responsibility of dealing with pollution and then pursuing a better life.last but not least, tourism's development contribute to pushing ahead of national culture, which is a characteristic symbol weighted national cultural soft power. In conclusion, we need to boost tourism.
