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小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:54浏览次数:2870
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用英语描述下自己长大后的理想,字数在100字以内。
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My future As Chuang Chou Dreaming a Butterfly, I always dream about the future. Sometimes I even don't know whether they were just dreams nor prophecies! Every little girl dreamed that they will be a beautiful and successful lady in the future so did I. The love of beauty is every woman's nature, in my mind, in future I want to be a lady not only has a beautiful appearance but also beautiful soul. It means that I should be a knowledgeable, kind, brave and upright lady! On the other hand, what's the meaning of success? This does not mean to become a wealthy man or celebrity. As far as I am concerned to be a successful person means to be a happy man. You may not have so much money but you have a job that you prefer to, you may not be famous, but there always some people love you. The most important thing is that there will be a person, for the world you are a woman, but for him you are the world! This is my imagination of the future!

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