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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11757
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

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Should private car owners be taxed for pollution With increasing develop economy society dramatically,an increasing of people have a ability to buy a car.Accordingly,with more and more people have a car,there is a issue about this situation that the environment is serious polluted.Obviously,when somebody ask me should private car owners be taxed for pollution.My answer is positive. There are a great many reasons to support my answer that why i will do this.We can see a beautiful and pure sky in our childhood that period hasn't a lot of cars.However,our environment has appeared various pollution,for instance,poison gas and polluted water and so on.Unfortunately,it is a seriously phenomenon that we can't see a great many of stars in the pure sky in the summer night. Consequently,we should take this suggest "pollution tax" on private car to prevent our environment.This way will reduce people using car,then the environment pollution problem will become better.Only in this way can we have a wonderful and colorful environment.

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