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文章层次较为清晰；部分高级词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强；复杂句的使用不是很丰富。
With the economical develepment, some people became just be attention to money more and more, they had lost their nutrure honest feature. The phnomnents had effected all society confidence and kindnessful morality. This is a kind of seriouse desease in current years. With Internet normal, more and more unhonest thing often causal in our society. For exmple, defraud's telephone generol call my telephone, I truly don't divile true or faule; Somebody defraud onther people utility man's kind-heartness; More serious, the big financial company cheat/deceive/fraud people of events often caused. Sb. even defraud their parents, brothers, sisters, friends and his classmates for money. Who are you can believe？ The suspect each other phenomenon of society had seriouse effect calture department. we need one honest, true each other and equal society, We donot need defraud, hypocritical and unhonest society.
