文章层次较为清晰;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Dear Mr.Johnson, I am Wang Haiyang.we are Had recived 3500 piece productions of your company on December twenty-two,but According to our singing of the NO.35 order,the production qualities is 3500 piece, From now on we could not recived other 500 pieces. Please check your product list and give us a answer as soon as possible,We are looking forward to your early reply! Your corporation partner Haiyang wanghaiyang@hotmail.com