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Dear Mr Johnson, I am Wang Haiyang. We are had received 3500 pieces production of your company on December twenty-two,but According to our singing of the NO.35 order,the production qualities are 3500 pieces,from now on we could not received other 500 pieces. Please check your product list and give us a answer as soon as possible,We are looking forward to your early reply! Your corporation partner Haiyang wanghaiyang@hotmail.com