回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
【精析】
此篇作文应为回复邀请的信函。在这类信函中要注意信的格式。时间应该写在右上角,称呼应顶格并首字母大写。正文要写清楚应邀还是拒绝,若拒绝,要写清楚理由,并向邀请人致歉。
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
June 10th Dear Li Wang, I am glad to get the received of your baby birthday party,but I will go back my state to deal with important thing of my company on June 10th, I feel so sorry to could not take part in your baby's party. From John Smith.