2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hello Mary, Today I will introduce my hometown to you, my hometown is a very beautiful city, it is known on the world that have thirteen ancient capitals. The very interesting place is Xi'an city wall,in the ancient of Tang, it is the very important army protection to assist on outside enemy. Now its the famous tourist place to attracted the home and foreign touristors,people take photo,running, look all the Xi'an city on the city wall, to feel the greatness of the ancient people.