2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；结构较为严谨，文中衔接成分很少。

Hello Mary, Today I will introduce my hometown to you, my hometown is a very beautiful city, it is known on the world that has thirteen ancient capitals. The very interesting place is Xi'an city wall,in the ancient of Tang, it is the very important army protection to assist on outside enemy. Now its the famous tourist attractions to attracted the home and foreign tourists,people take photo,running, look all the Xi'an city on the city wall, to feel the greatness of the ancient people.