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可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文中衔接词丰富。
The famous saying “why it is unwise to put all eggs in the basket”places a high value on the importance of considering matters from all aspects, showing the necessity of enhancing our awareness of the significance of thinking about things from many sides. A case in point is our academic studies. There is no denying in saying that without learning all the necessary courses, we would not achieve anything great in our personal growth and academic studies. We must pay attention to all sides of our studies instead of focusing on just one or two subjects. It is not too much to say that considering matters from all aspects plays an indispensable role in our life. In order to enhance our awareness of considering matters from all aspects, it is necessary that we attach great importance to (the ability of thinking about things from many sides ). From my perspective, the role played by this quality can never be overemphasized. And as college students, it is high time that we paid close attention to it
