2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题:Watching TV

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Nowadays, TV has become a vital household appliance and watching TV takes the main entertainment position after dinner. Meanwhile, a prevailing activity always come with drawbcaks as well. Some people believe that watching TV could be harmful to children, to some extent, people should also not deny the advantages of it. Accordingly, an appropriate and healthy habit of watching TV is essential for children. First thing first, long time watching TV could harm children's bodies as they have not grown mature completely. For example, children could get near sight if they spend too much time on staring at TV with a close watching distance. Besides, watching TV deprives children of time to interact with their family members so each of them might be isolated by each other. On the other hand, what category of TV program the children are watching will indirectly affect their behavior in the real life. For instance, violence factors are involved in many cartoon TV programs that may stimulate children to choose am extreme way to solve a trouble. Presumably, to lead children with a healthy and proper TV watching habit is significant. At this point, it must be made clear that TV is also an effective information transmisson tool in this generation, which can be also conducive for children with sufficient support of fresh knowledge and news. For example, a big amount of childish news channels has been settled globaly and designed to suit with children's thought patterns for keeping the children informed and aware of what happened in the world. For another benefit, children could use their spare time to learn interesting knowledge through TV happly after a whole day schooling life. Altogether, watching TV could be harmful on children's body and thoughts, however, children could benefit from watching TV if they are taught and leaded with appropriate way.