2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Nowadays,more and more parents do everything for their children,such as,make decisions for them about school,friends,future and so on.But it's bad for their children to live independent,which can make great impact for their future life. In order to help their children,the parents should do such things.First of all,they should regrat their children as a man not a boy,let them do what they want to do,they have their own thought.What's more,when they face difficulty,parents should let them try their best to overcome this by themselves,and parents can give them some suggestions.Last but not least,let their children to adapted the society early so that they can fit very well in the future.