题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文中衔接词丰富;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
On maintaining trust As the saying goes"trust is the foundation of human communication",according to the saying we can easily know trust is the much improtance of people's daily life.Now, I will confirm my viewpoint. There is no doubt that trust plays a huge role in communication.Friends need to trust which can make them face difficults together.Colleges are supposed to trust,because trust let them take responsibility together.And what's the most important that couple must on maintaining trust,just do this,they can let their marry long,and keep the family harmonious. As far as I'm concerned,all of us ought to on maintaining trust,because trust make us more and more closely and we like the big family.We can do many difficult things with friends ,colleges and so on,we also can share happiness with each other.