采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;作者在高级词汇方面还有很大的空间,还要注意单词拼写。
Among all the highlighted topics,one is “It is not wise to reache the conclusion promptly according to what we saw and heard. I cannot agreed with it more .Some times ,we are ussally chatted by what we saw an heard. Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples about this topic,with the following one being the foremost.Several years ago ,due to the nuclear pollution in Japan,a lot of chinese ppeopple ,especially middle-aged people and the seniors ,rushed to buy salt ,firmlly believing salt can prevent radiation,which was ridiculous.Moreover,we can find many beautifull wommen photos when we browsing the Web,but these picitures has been modified by photoshop. It is vary necessary to drawn conclusion after careful consideration,especially in the age of knowledge explosion,when the news facts ,opinions even rummors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.Only in this way ,can we keep a clear mind and reach sound joudgments.
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