采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。
Among all the highlighted topics,one is “It is not wise to reach the conclusion promptly according to what we saw and heard.I can'nt agreed with it more.Some times,we are usually take in by what we saw and heard. Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples about this topic,with the following one being the foremost.Several years ago,due to the nuclear pollution in Japan,a hot of Chinese,especially middle-aged persons and the seniors,rushed to buy salt,firmly believing salt can prevent radiation,which was ridiculous.Moreover,we can find many beautiful women photos when we browsing the Web,but these pictures have been modified by photoshop. It is necessary for us to drawn conclusion after careful consideration,especially in the age of knowledge explosion,when the news facts,opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.Only in this way,can we keep a clear mind and reach sound judgement.
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