2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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At present,shopping online has been a fashion way to make people feel the developing society,and people is adapting to this. It's easy for us to know that everything has two coins.So shopping online also has two coins.On the one hand,the point on it is that shopping online offers a convenient way for the people who like shopping without going out.At the same time,the price of the products online are cheaper than the shops in our life.But on the other hand,shopping online also has some shortcomings,people are easy cheated by the dishonest sellers,so maybe they would loose the products and the money. Frome my perspective,we should treat the shopping online seriously,we should find some shops online which have a good reputation,so it will guarantee the products’ quailty.Anyway the sellers should be honest and offer a good atmosphere to the buyers.Only by this way can we shopping online safety and happily.