2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to china , i am glad you spend times in visiting my hometown , here i will intruduce those brilliant places for you . as a goes , chendu is a city that visitors unwilling to leave ,that is right . first , there is not dounbt that chendu has plenty of dilicious food as well as famous place , and then , the weather in chendu is comfortable