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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分53.5分
评语:

文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

I agree with the statement. The price of commodity is quite lower in rural aera than in the city. The air is fresh so that it is good to people's health. Living in the rural aera is quiet. You dont worry about the noise and the traffic. In the countryside, people live in the vicinity, they get to know each other and get along quite well. Living in the city means more daily expenditure. Most people live in the building where they even dont know their neighbours. The traffic in the city is very crowded. To sum up, living in the countryside is better.

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