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作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看？给出具体原因。
字数要求:300字以内。
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中用词稍显贫乏，请多使用高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
I agree to this viewpoint. The price of the commodity is quite lower in rural area than in the city. The air is so fresh that it is good for people's health. Living in the rural area is quiet. You don‘t worry about the noise and the traffic. In the countryside, people live in the vicinity, so they get to know each other and get along quite well. Living in the city means more daily expenditure. Most people live in the building where they even dont know their neighbours. The traffic in the city is very crowded. To sum up, living in the countryside is better.
