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文章层次较为清晰；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
When it comes to my college's days,I will cannot wait to remmber the course that has impressed me most in college. I was really fool when I was as a freshman .Beause I got in college for a short time after measurement ,I was interested in the any new things that I had not saw ever .One day ,a strange man talked with me about his cretive story in my way to library.What's more he invited me to see his work room and I was glad to agree it for my curiosity.Fllowing him for a long time ,I feel strange and I want leave him.But,he rejected it.Luckly,I escaped from his hand finally. There is nodoubt that the experence is horrifing,but it also learn me the fact that not believe strange people easily.
