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As soon as when it comes to my college's days,I cannot wait to recall the course that has impressed me most in college. I was really fool when I was as a freshman.Beause I got in college for a short time after measurement,I was interested in the things that I had not saw ever .One day,a strange man talked with me about the entrepreneurial story that he tried his best to stuggle to work on my way to the library at my college.What's more he invited me to see his work room and I was glad to agree it for my curiosity.Fllowing him for a long time ,I feel strange and I want to leave him.Nevertheless,he rejected it.Luckily,I escaped from his hand finally. There is nodoubt that the experence is frightening,but it also learn me the fact that not believe strange people easily.
