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A beautiful city in china ,china have many beautiful places,in fact.My hometown is belong to anther beautiful places.Frish of all,we will recommodate my beautiful hometown.myd hometown is located to southern china ,we live in hainan, this is a fomous travel places ,and have peoples cosmtoms,people is friendly.there weather is hot in summer.but winter is warm .and the most intersting place is sanya .would you come there ,I will take you to see sea ,because the sea singths is beatiful .there have a varity of sea foods and drinks .and beatiful singths.you can swimming in sea face ,or you can sit down in the beach .you can enjoy sunshine .when nigth coming back,you con see a beautiful sunrise.there is go for travel on holiday,welcome to us beautiful hometown and you can't be lose hope and have a good time ,will be have unforgetten memoriy.
