2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写。

a beautiful cit in china In china,there is a place named shaoshan,It not olny has fresh air ,but also hava a famous person in there--maozedong,so if a foreign friend of mine is going to visit our hometown ,I will take he to shaoshan. In 1949,Mr mao declared"the peoples republic of china is set up" ,the news are known for all of the world .