2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化多样；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写。

a beautiful cit in china In China,there is a place named shaoshan,it not olny has fresh air ,but also have a famous person in there--maozedong,so if a foreign friend of mine is going to visit our hometown ,I will take he to shaoshan. In 1949,Mr mao declared"the people's republic of China is set up" ,the news is known for all of the world .