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A beautiful city in China ,China has many beautiful places,in fact.My hometown belongs to another beautiful places.Frist of all,we will recommend my beautiful hometown.my hometown is located to southe China ,we live in Hainan, this is a famous travel places ,and have peoples customs,people is friendly.there weather is hot in summer.but winter is warm .and the most interesting place is Sanya .would you come to there ,I will take you to see sea ,because the sea singths is beatiful .there have a varity of sea foods and drinks .and beatiful sights.you can swimming in sea face ,or you can sit down in the beach .you can enjoy sunshine .when nigth coming back,you con see a beautiful sunrise.there is going for travel on holiday,welcome to us beautiful hometown and you can't be lose hope and have a good time ,will be have unforgettable memory.
