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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

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Can be seen from the above chart, people's income is gradually increasing with their degree of Education.The higher the education level, the higher the wages. On the contrary, the low level of education is relatively low.As we can see from the chart, the unemployment rate is inversely proportional to the degree of education, and the education level of most of the unemployed is generally low. Thus can be seen, The greater the investment in education, the greater the return on the future.This, of course, is not absolute.The most important is the ability to see the hired person.If you can not, wages are not as low as those who are relatively low, but also normal.After all, the boss is the most valued or personal ability. So receive a good education is to help us to better cultivate their ability, and after leaving school can better restrain themselves, encourage myself to. So, I think it is worthwhile to pay a huge investment in education.

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