2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

It is known that the mobile phone is the great invention of the modern society. In the past time people meet should make an appointment each other the day after tomorrow, if someone is too busy today to meet on time, the other people can not be telled，it is trouble，isn't it? Now people could contact each other at anywhere and anytime through the mobile phone, and contact each other stranger people that you have not his phone NO. The mobile phone brings us many good life qualities. But now people are crossing the street looking at their phones and using walking sticks in order to see, it is too serious. people are also looking thrie phones when they talking each other. people weast a lot of time to shoping online, to chat, to conversion and not face to face. They talking by phone too late sleeping to get up early. So I sugesstion all people to plan your work and life in a normal time.