2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

It is known that the mobile phone is the great invention of the modern society. In past time people meet should make an appointment each other the day after tomorrow, if someone is too busy today to meet on time, the other people can not be told, it is a trouble，isn't it? Now people could contact each other at anywhere and anytime through the mobile phone, and contact each other stranger people that if you have his phone NO. The mobile phone brings us many good life qualities. But now people are crossing the street looking at their phones and using walking sticks in order to see, it is too serious. people are also looking their phones when they talking each other. people waste a lot of time to shopping online, to chat, to conversion and not face to face. They talking by phone too late sleeping to get up early. So I sugesstion all people to plan your work and life in a normal time.