牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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This weekend l went beijing wild zoo. There were a lot visitors.They fed monkeys and played with tigers. Animals are frendly to us.So we should treat them well.It is important to protect our environment .Don't throw litter everywhere.Now l have known the importance of protecting animals. Protecting animals is good for us.Let's take action to make our earth more beautiful!