英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写电邮

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。

To:John@163.com From:Tomsmith@hotmail.com Dear John Driscoll, I'm Tom Smith,the general manager of Sales Department about Fox Electronic Comply.I want to talking you about our new produce on June 20th.The talking still are the launch date of the new product and the canteen about it.I hope we can establish the longer business relationship with each other. Best wishes to you. Tom Smith