2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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The experience of success is the sum to time and perspiration.The famous saying:Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration. Efforts play a high value on the importance.There is not much to say that achieve success from time and as soon as possible.A case in point is our result of the examination.There is no denying that without our precious time and perspiration.We would not achieve anything great in your personal growth and improvement of record.Therefore,We must be more diligent and strong from thinking of its instead of impatient and irrespective. It's not too much to say that time and perspiration to success play an indispensable role in our life .So called no pain no gain is in that means.In order to give enough time and from our life .It's necessary that we attach great importance to the couscious of thinking about devoting time and patient in all ways. From my perspective,the role no afraid failure and insist on exerting yourself can never be overemphaiszed .And as college students,it is high time that we paid close attention to it.