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字数:300 满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者词汇表达不够丰富,在单词拼写方面也要继续努��。
I think buying things in group is a waste of momey. Because we do not really need the things we buy,there are many website for group buying,the website provides the meal which cost hundends of money,in fact,if we cook in our home ,it costs a little money. some service such as watching films in the cinema,it is a waste of money, because we can see the film from the computer. So,I think we do not need the buying for groups.