牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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This weekend I went to the Beijing wild zoo.. I saw many interesting things.There were a lot of tourists in the zoo, they fed the monkey and the tiger. Animal and human is very friendly, we should treat animal.I think it's important to protect environment, do not throw garbage anywhere in the zoo.Now I know the importance of wild animal protection, animal protection is to protect ourselves.Let us do something to protect nature point do everything in one's power!