2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to hear that you will visit my hometown,I want to take you go to culture square, I believe that you will have a good time. At the culture square,on the on hand,you can learn much knowledge about our history,on the other other hand,With time goes,we alaway surf the Internet leading to do little exerses,so we can do more excers.Then we can take photos togther in orde to let us remind of the happy life. In my opinions,culture square is the best one where you can visit, I look forward to treating you.