2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

nowadays,Excessive packaging is full of our daily life.there are many goods with good packing in the market.these goods's packing are made of treasure material and have delicate picture. the reason why there are so many goods with goods packing in our daily is that our view to choose goods has changed.we pay more attention to goods'packing rather than the quality of goods.we are attracted by superb packing so that we ignore the essential information and quality of goods.what'more,in order to sell well,producer manage to provide good packing with their goods,which results in why we can see so many good packing goods. in my opinion,I think it bad for us to choose goods on our will.Meanwhile,We are cheated by delicate packing,We pay more attention to good's packing rather than the quality of goods.We are attracted by superb packing so that we ignore the essential information and quality of goods.