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2003年专八英语作文真题:A Self-conscious and Sympathetic Generation

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:40浏览次数:3227
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题目 A Self-conscious and Sympathetic Generation
说明 An English newspaper is currently running a discussion on whether young people in China today are (not) more self-centered and unsympathetic than were previous generations. And the paper is inviting contributions from university students. You have been asked to write a short article for the newspaper to air your views.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分41.0分
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文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累学术词汇;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

I think young people in China today are more self-centered than previous generations. Young people's life is better than previous generations.Many parents love their children.Many parents do not let their children do housework.So young people in China do not know the life is hard. It cause the young people selfish and lazy and self-centered. So parents should chang the way they teach their children with.

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